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| Frodo's vision on Amon Hen, by Cor Blok |
Let us compare. First, Griffith begins
with a general overview:
"Then suddenly it seemed as though [his eyes] opened again of
their own accord, and were endowed with an infinite power of vision.
The trees and lawns of the home park of Alanmere and the dark rolling
hills of heather beyond were gone, and in their place lay stretched
out a continent which he saw as though from some enormous height,
with its plains and lowlands and rivers, vast steppes and snowclad
hills, forests and tablelands, huge mountain masses rearing lonely
peaks of everlasting ice to a sunlight that had no heat; and then
beyond these again more plains and forests, that stretched away
southward until they merged in the all-surrounding sea."
Here follows the beginning of Frodo's vision in The
Fellowship of the Rings:
"Then here and there the mist gave way and he saw many
visions: small and clear as if they were under his eyes upon a table,
and yet remote. ... The world seemed to have shrunk and fallen
silent. ... Eastward he looked into wide uncharted lands, nameless
plains, and forests unexplored. Northward he looked, and the Great
River lay like a ribbon beneath him, and the Misty Mountains stood
small and hard as broken teeth. Westward he looked and saw the broad
pastures of Rohan; and Orthanc, the pinnacle of Isengard, like a
black spike. Southward he looked, and below his very feet the Great
River curled like a toppling wave and plunged over the falls of
Rauros into a foaming pit; a glimmering rainbow played upon the fume.
And Ethir Anduin he saw, the mighty delta of the River, and myriads
of sea-birds whirling like a white dust in the sun, and beneath them
a green and silver sea, rippling in endless lines."
Though the wording is different, the general structure is the same: We see very different landscapes, yet no sign of population,
a sweeping view, and in the end: the sea.
Griffith continues:
"Then he seemed to be carried forward towards the scene until
he could distinguish the smallest objects upon the earth, and he saw,
swarming southward and westward, vast hordes of men, that divided
into long streams, and poured through mountain passes and defiles,
and spread themselves again over fertile lands, like locusts over
green fields of young corn. And wherever those hordes swept forward,
a long line of fire and smoke went in front of them, and where they
had passed the earth was a blackened wilderness.
Then, too, from the coasts and islands vast fleets of war-ships
put out, pouring their clouds of smoke to the sky, and making swiftly
for the southward and westward, where from other coasts and islands
other vessels put out to meet them, and, meeting them, were lost with
them under great clouds of grey smoke, through which flashed
incessantly long livid tongues of flame.
Then, like a panorama rolled away from him, the mighty picture
receded and new lands came into view, familiar lands which he had
traversed often. They too were black and wasted with the tempest of
war from east to west, but nevertheless those swarming streams came
on, countless and undiminished, up out of the south and east, while
on the western verge vast armies and fleets battled desperately with
each other on sea and land, as though they heeded not those locust
swarms of dusky millions coming ever nearer and nearer."
Now Frodo's vision:
"But everywhere he looked he saw the signs of war. The Misty
Mountains were crawling like anthills: orcs were issuing out of a
thousand holes. Under the boughs of Mirkwood there was deadly strife
of Elves and Men and fell beasts. The land of the Beornings was
aflame; a cloud was over Moria; smoke rose on the borders of Lórien.
Horsemen were galloping on the grass of Rohan; wolves poured from
Isengard. From the havens of Harad ships of war put out to sea; and
out of the East Men were moving endlessly: swordsmen, spearmen,
bowmen upon horses, chariots of chieftains and laden wains. All the
power of the Dark Lord was in motion."
Again there are striking similarities. Griffith
applies locusts, Tolkien uses ants. Hordes of men 'pour'
through mountain passes and defiles, as do Tolkien's wolves. Warships
leave their ports in both stories.
Next, there comes the city, unnamed in The Angel:
"Once more the scene rolled backwards, and he saw a mighty
city closely beleaguered by two vast hosts of men, who slowly pushed
their batteries forward until they planted them on all the
surrounding heights and poured a hail of shot and shell upon the
swarming, helpless millions that were crowded within the impassable
ring of fire and smoke. Above the devoted city swam in mid-air
strange shapes like monstrous birds of prey, and beneath where they
floated the earth seemed ever and anon to open and belch forth smoke
and flame into which the crumbling houses fell and burnt in heaps of
shapeless ruins."
Does this not fit the Battle on the Pelennor Fields as well, particularly regarding those 'monstrous birds of prey'? Frodo as well perceives a city, but strays before war reaches it:
"Then turning south again he beheld Minas Tirith. Far away it
seemed. and beautiful: white-walled, many-towered, proud and fair
upon its mountain-seat; its battlements glittered with steel, and its
turrets were bright with many banners. Hope leaped in his heart. But
against Minas Tirith was set another fortress, greater and more
strong. Thither, eastward, unwilling his eye was drawn. It passed the
ruined bridges of Osgiliath, the grinning gates of Minas Morgul. and
the haunted Mountains, and it looked upon Gorgoroth, the valley of
terror in the Land of Mordor. Darkness lay there under the Sun. Fire
glowed amid the smoke. Mount Doom was burning, and a great reek
rising. Then at last his gaze was held: wall upon wall, battlement
upon battlement, black, immeasurably strong, mountain of iron, gate
of steel, tower of adamant, he saw it: Barad-dûr, Fortress of
Sauron. All hope left him."
Though it could not be said that Tolkien has plagiarised Griffith, the basic structure of both scenes is similar enough to raise suspicions. The three dominant elements are the very same, and they come in the same order: (1) a general overview of the setting, (2) an overview of the armies and fleets in motion, (3) a city to be beleaguered.
So, was Tolkien familiar with George Griffith's The Angel of the Revolution? Had he read it once? Did he perhaps consciously try to place this oddly esoteric scene in an otherwise very technocratic story into a better fitting context?
So, was Tolkien familiar with George Griffith's The Angel of the Revolution? Had he read it once? Did he perhaps consciously try to place this oddly esoteric scene in an otherwise very technocratic story into a better fitting context?
